Their applause and encouragement were drugs to my blood. I was more active, happy and felt like i could do anything with them around me. Everyone around me encouraged me to sail along. Everything was in my favour, the pleasant sun, the cool breeze sailing past us, the beautiful butterflies feeding on the dazzling flowers, the chirrups of the small birds flying around - I was in heaven. I could see happiness in every eye that met mine.
But in that ecstatic state, i slipped. I was carried away too far by the encore and one mistake was all it took. There was dead silence all around.
I was lost.
With a bleeding heart, I looked around for a caring soul, for a loving heart, for a smiling lips only to stare at the emptyness around me. Tears ran down my eyes washing away any trace of euphoria that had once played along. Slowly the tears feel onto the river below me blurring my own reflection staring back at me in silence.
My only friend.
42 comments:
Too Good, Amal!
no word or sentence was irrelevant or repetitive..just perfect piece of creative writing n yes..We r our BestFriend:)
am i the first??? :-)
Wow!!! :)
when i started reading i felt so good that you are writing something very pleasant and lovely but it turned bitter as i went ahead....
:(
nicely written but i wish to see the joy in you.... which all of sudden dunno i always find missing....
u made a perfect point man...it was just awesome the way u wrote the whole thing...:)...simply superb :)...i to have my only frnd with me at all times..
urs..hemu..
@ Vinnie
thank you Vinnie... but i think there are exceptions.. :)
@ Ki
thanks
tc :)
@ Hemanth
thanks a lot buddy :)
yes.. we all have that loyal friend in us... who ll never betray us
@ Deepika
he he..
next would probably be a happy post.. ;)
Too sad kinda... but amazingly written :D
thanks Winnie..
well ya.. ill try for a happy post next time.. :)
Absolutely fantastic. Keep up the good work :)
beautiful........just got lost....
@ Indian pie
thanks mate.. :)
do visit again.
@ Priya..
thanks a lot for the feedback
A nice up rise and fall of emotions. Liked it.
Cheers,
Velu
Smart one ...... Impressed Bud :)
@ Velu
welcome to my blog
n thank you.. :)
do visit often
@Rahul
thanks mate :)
that was impressive. nice language.
thanks a lot.. :-)
it was soo real...simple n amazing..
tc :)
ah so well put across...n perfect title to d post
interesting read man......... :)
@swati
thanks for the feedback
@Mayz
thanks mate..
actually that was the first name that came to my mind
@ muthu
thanks mate :-)
recognition is always a drug bro.. neatly penned your thoughts... our soul is our best friend.. true
chriz
Beautifully scripted.. bt sme hw i am seein that many of ur post end in a sad note...
@ chriz
thats true mate, recognition is a drug.
thanks for the feedback :-)
@ devil inc
yeah.. many are of the opinion.. my next post would be a happy one, i assure you :-)
very true amal... sometimes the only person who you know will never let you down is inside you :)
looking forward to a happy post now...
my first time here
and i thoroughly enjoyed it :)
@Little girl
ya.. next will be a happy post :-)
thanks for the feedback.
@ AD
welcome to my blog
thanks for the feedback and do visit again :-)
Great!
thanks buddy.. :-)
A well written piece. Made me want to read more. Waiting to read the next piece.
thank you Ashwadhy, thanks a lot :)
Good write up Amal...
I like you blog... I hoped here from someone's blog.. & you are now blogrolled..
Keep writing
thank u..
thanks a lot :-)
Brilliant writing! U r gifted! Keep up the good work bro! Regards.
thanks buddy :-)
tc
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